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Thursday, April 16, 2009

Scattered Thoughts...

Memories...
Everything that ever happened between us...was never real.

A falsehood always shrouding the truth.

An enigma waiting to be revealed...

a truth so real,a taste so tingling,a thought so revealing..

a Dream so Unnerving.

I wonder if I am real..and that’s when I see you...

Pain

What have you ruined ?

A shadow of betrayal as memories scream.

Once we were together in wonder,

wide-eyed and hand in hand,

but your thirst paled.

A vengeful pool of darkness .

Drops of blood follow night,

follow night.

Love bled dry.
In a rush of sorrow,

I hate you...

[The blog has been idle for a while so the apologies must happen. Better writing shall soon occur. Putting up poems which were written quite a while back but were never put up. Read, hate, whatever.]

24 comments:

Illeen said...

You come back with strong words.

Welcome back. :)

Preeti said...

Read, hate whatever...???

Do one thing...just read what you have written. it is so beautiful and simple that even those people who are afraid of reading poetry will end up being stunned.

it is thought that poems are written when emotions are at heights and when feelings need an outlet. there are writers/poets who defy this thought. and i can only pray that you are one of the defiants and not a sorrower...

if idling can give birth to such a beautiful creation then, Lord Scribbler [akin to Lord Byron] please continue to keep this blog idle.

BUT...the statement "putting up poems" sounds quite good...and although there is a certain amount of disjointedness in this poem it speaks with an endearing earnestness that is quite touching. a change from dark fiction but still retaining an element of darkness...

Nice. Very nice...

Vaudevillian said...

I agree.

I loathe normal poetry, but this gives out some next level luminescence.

Jadis said...

beautiful.:)

Keith Mascarenhas said...

Sweet stuff dude!
Keep it comin!

Think Tank said...

i'm just so glad u came back again :)

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

this is so intense and beautiful... I love it :-)

swati said...

it was so simple yet so touching...BEUtiful..

Nikki said...

Hello!

Good to see you writing again. Though I prefer your fiction more...

Vinnie said...

poem acchi hain...lekin fiction chahiye...aapke style mein..missed that so !
take care :)

Shaili said...

Oh so someone's back... lovely lines...

Reeta Skeeter said...

haha... not bad to fill up the blog...the poem makes for a fine read...
cheers!

Pooja said...

stop bein' horribly humble...

der no way ne1 can hate dis...it mght b a lot simpler dan wot u usually write but dat doesn't rob off it's splendour...

Heart'n'Soul said...

Read, hate, whatever???

LOLz

read it - loved it

well written mithun :)
its absolutely rockingly awesome... simple n yet so impactful!

creyzeee said...

wow.

Nikki said...

Where have you disappeared and what keeps you away from writing?

Update soon. Tc

arunima said...

so true...pretty much sums up what i'm goin thru now

The 'Mad' Orchid said...

Read, hate, whatever
hmmm
I choose to read and read..apologies from my side as well was absconding from the blogsville from quite a time..good to know i hve had company..and im back as well..so see u around with loads more of 'better' (as in ur lingo) writings..btw this quite more than better I guess.. ;)
Take care..
cheers!

anu!~ said...

Ouch,now thats pretty harsh!
The height of your emotions is pretty starting but the way you put it into words..balances it out :)
Great work!

Fali said...

i like this..
i don't like reading complicated poetry..but I do like this one.
simple and beautiful..

Abhu said...

hey! Read ur blog after REALLY long today.
Liked wat u've written.

♪♪HARINI♪♪ said...

wow! so beautiful!!

Vaudevillian said...

duude it's friday the 13th in four months man where'v you been?

much horrors & peace!

workhard said...

Hi.. ur writing is good....

very strong emotions...


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